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healty habits
I don't smoke, beacause longtimesmokers lose about 10 years of their lives.
And I don't want to lose 10 years of my live per it.
For my breakfast, I eat a lot fruits and vegetables because this lawer rates of cardiovascular disease.
Too, I drink water sometime during the day, and after run, because it is kind of a magical substance: it helps prevent kidney stones and is necessary to hydrate our body.
Each year, I go to the doctor.
Doctor check my heart and my head.
Too, I go to the dentist for clean my mouth.
Everyday, I runnig because is healthy for my heart and it helps to strong my bones

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- I don't smoke, beacause longtimesmokers lose about 10 years of their lives.
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- And I don't want to lose 10 years of my live per it.
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- For my breakfast, I eat a lot fruits and vegetables because this lawer rates of cardiovascular disease.
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- Too, I drink water sometime during the day, and after run, because it is kind of a magical substance: it helps prevent kidney stones and is necessary to hydrate our body.
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- Each year, I go to the doctor.
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- Doctor check my heart and my head.
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- Too, I go to the dentist for clean my mouth.
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- Everyday, I runnig because is healthy for my heart and it helps to strong my bones
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8