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How to be a humain
To be a human is a mission, a responsibility and a duty, to give and to strengthen your spirit.
To think, to initiate without retreat, to change at the necessary time without damaging, to loyalty to your values and concretize them to always create the efficiency

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- To be a human is a mission, a responsibility and a duty, to give and to strengthen your spirit.
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- To think, to initiate without retreat, to change at the necessary time without damaging, to loyalty to your values and concretize them to always create the efficiency
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