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Something inside me
My name is abdalla i want to learn english and i write this litter now because i heard that if i wrote in here some persons will help me learning ,does that thing is right?
so if any one know how i can learn tell me and thank you

abdoman7044June 2017100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Something inside me
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句子 1
- My name is abdalla i want to learn english and i write this litter now because i heard that if i wrote in here some persons will help me learning ,does that thing is right?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- so if any one know how i can learn tell me and thank you
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2