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  • Alan entered the room, the darkness was lurking but in the room, she can not enter, there is light and hope, all fear and despair are gone gone, It´s a moment of paz for him, he walked till the center, in that place there was a box a little strange, When Alan opened the box , felt something relief in his inside In the box there was a little toy was familiar for him,spent a time When he remember like his mom said that, When he was afraid the little toy was there for protec him and the dark no might do nothing against him , by end Alan could find the answer that needed.

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    • Alan entered the room, the darkness was lurking but in the room, she can not enter, there is light and hope, all fear and despair are gone gone, It´s a moment of paz for him, he walked till the center, in that place there was a box a little strange, When Alan opened the box , felt something relief in his inside In the box there was a little toy was familiar for him,spent a time When he remember like his mom said that, When he was afraid the little toy was there for protec him and the dark no might do nothing against him , by end Alan could find the answer that needed.
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