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  • A motivation letter for a summer course

  • Dear Sir or Madam After having reviewed your offer for a summer course in pharmacy, I decided to fill in an application form.
  • Highly interested, I propose to you to examine my candidature.
  • I am a Colombian graduated pharmacist and I’m currently completing a master’s degree of public health (1st year) at the Paris Diderot University and an internship in the Paris region’ pharmacoepidemiology center.
  • In the future, I would like to specialize myself in pharmacoepidemiology and pharmaceutical policies research.
  • I’m particularly passionate in deepening my knowledge about the impact of medicines on public health and I would like to focus my career in developing multidisciplinary solutions to global problematics in this field .
  • Indeed, since summer 2010, I work as the chief editor and writer for the bulletin of the Drug Information Center of the Colombia’s National University (CIMUN), which is a member of the International Society of Drug Bulletins (ISDB).
  • CIMUN’s bulletin intends to deliver rigorous, critical and independent information to healthcare professionals and stakeholders to improve drug utilization and policymaking.
  • At this position, I’ve been able to investigate and analyze the factors causing the actual epidemics of irrational drug use and inequity in access to essential drugs that co-exist in middle-income countries like Colombia.
  • These problems are accentuated by the absence of a strong national pharmaceutical policy and the extensive influence of pharmaceutical industry in legislators and their neoliberal policies.
  • Moreover, my experience in France has brought to me a whole new vision of pharmaceutical policies as this country is experiencing a fast evolution in medicines regulation since the globally known mediator scandal -an anorectic drug marketed as an antidiabetic-, which has caused almost 1300 deaths because of heart valve disease.
  • These regulations include hard restrictions on off-label drug use and more stringent pharmacovigilance legislation.
  • In fact, my master’s research project would be probably based in the former subject and would be realized jointly with the Colombian and French research groups that I belong to.
  • For these reasons I would be an honor to me to be able to assist to the summer course.
  • I would be a unique opportunity for me to hear the view of international experts in the field and to be able to contribute to the discussion from my experience both in Colombia and in France.
  • Yours faithfully,

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Dear Sir or Madam After having reviewed your offer for a summer course in pharmacy, I decided to fill in an application form.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1
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    • I am a Colombian graduated pharmacist and I’m currently completing a master’s degree of public health (1st year) at the Paris Diderot University and an internship in the Paris region’ pharmacoepidemiology center.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
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    • In the future, I would like to specialize myself in pharmacoepidemiology and pharmaceutical policies research.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4
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    • I’m particularly passionate in deepening my knowledge about the impact of medicines on public health and I would like to focus my career in developing multidisciplinary solutions to global problematics in this field .
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5
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    • Indeed, since summer 2010, I work as the chief editor and writer for the bulletin of the Drug Information Center of the Colombia’s National University (CIMUN), which is a member of the International Society of Drug Bulletins (ISDB).
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6
  • veta 7
    • CIMUN’s bulletin intends to deliver rigorous, critical and independent information to healthcare professionals and stakeholders to improve drug utilization and policymaking.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
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    • At this position, I’ve been able to investigate and analyze the factors causing the actual epidemics of irrational drug use and inequity in access to essential drugs that co-exist in middle-income countries like Colombia.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8
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    • These problems are accentuated by the absence of a strong national pharmaceutical policy and the extensive influence of pharmaceutical industry in legislators and their neoliberal policies.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9
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    • Moreover, my experience in France has brought to me a whole new vision of pharmaceutical policies as this country is experiencing a fast evolution in medicines regulation since the globally known mediator scandal -an anorectic drug marketed as an antidiabetic-, which has caused almost 1300 deaths because of heart valve disease.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 10PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 10
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    • These regulations include hard restrictions on off-label drug use and more stringent pharmacovigilance legislation.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11
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    • In fact, my master’s research project would be probably based in the former subject and would be realized jointly with the Colombian and French research groups that I belong to.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12
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    • I would be a unique opportunity for me to hear the view of international experts in the field and to be able to contribute to the discussion from my experience both in Colombia and in France.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14
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