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The Tower of Dona
Kaliningrad has a rich history.
Before the Second World War it was Germany city and called Konigsberg.
But after the Victory over fascism the city was transfered to Russia...
Recently I've been on the top of defensive tower.
It calls Tower of Dona and right here was raised the red Soviet flag in honor of the capture of Konigsberg in1945.
On this picture isn't Kaliningrad.
Simply these old buildings remind me about ruins of Konigsberg.
Only a few of them are in good condition, such as the Tower of Dona.
And now you know about it.

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- The Tower of Dona
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- Kaliningrad has a rich history.
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句子 2
- Before the Second World War it was Germany city and called Konigsberg.
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句子 3
- But after the Victory over fascism the city was transfered to Russia...
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句子 4
- Recently I've been on the top of defensive tower.
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句子 5
- It calls Tower of Dona and right here was raised the red Soviet flag in honor of the capture of Konigsberg in1945.
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- On this picture isn't Kaliningrad.
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句子 7
- Simply these old buildings remind me about ruins of Konigsberg.
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- Only a few of them are in good condition, such as the Tower of Dona.
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句子 9
- And now you know about it.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9