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  • Air pollution

  • Firstly, it is obvious that at the root of any environmental problem, including the lack of clean air, is the irrational usage and consumption of natural resources by mankind.
  • Moreover, the modern society factors such as global industrialization, an increase in the number of transport vehicles using internal combustion engines and a steady increase of the population, accelerate this process in a geometric progression.
  • Satisfying the need of a growing humanity in food and building materials, people continue to cut down forests - the main sources of oxygen, which also directly affects the quality of the inhaled air, the shortage of which is acute in megacities.
  • For example, according to recent studies, air in cities with a population of more than one million inhabitants over the past 10 years has become 21% more polluted than before.

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    • Firstly, it is obvious that at the root of any environmental problem, including the lack of clean air, is the irrational usage and consumption of natural resources by mankind.
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    • Moreover, the modern society factors such as global industrialization, an increase in the number of transport vehicles using internal combustion engines and a steady increase of the population, accelerate this process in a geometric progression.
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    • Satisfying the need of a growing humanity in food and building materials, people continue to cut down forests - the main sources of oxygen, which also directly affects the quality of the inhaled air, the shortage of which is acute in megacities.
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    • For example, according to recent studies, air in cities with a population of more than one million inhabitants over the past 10 years has become 21% more polluted than before.
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