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從aye_iso來的文本 - English

  • Hello everyone , this is my first ^^

  • Hii everybody , i'm aymen k I'm from Algeria , I'm 21 years old , i study engineering , i wanna improve my English that's why im here , also I'm studying English at the Universal Learning Centre , i start from the first level , now i'm in the third level , i can speak and write better than before but I'm still bad .
  • i hope you correct me this part and evaluate me ^^

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    • Hii everybody , i'm aymen k I'm from Algeria , I'm 21 years old , i study engineering , i wanna improve my English that's why im here , also I'm studying English at the Universal Learning Centre , i start from the first level , now i'm in the third level , i can speak and write better than before but I'm still bad .
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