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MY LIFE/STUDIES BALANCE
My life/studies balance is complicated.
At the morning, I study Medicine and I arrive at my house around at 5:00 pm every day.
I wish I have more time for me, for sleep, for my family and my boyfriend, maybe have a pet.
Neither can practice a sport because I suffer a collagen disease, and I get tired easily.
By medical indication, I need sleep around nine hours every day, but it is impossible.
My English teacher orders a lot of homework (I'm kidding).
In general, I have little free time but I hope one day all this is worth it when, in the future, I help others.

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- My life/studies balance is complicated.
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문장 2
- At the morning, I study Medicine and I arrive at my house around at 5:00 pm every day.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I wish I have more time for me, for sleep, for my family and my boyfriend, maybe have a pet.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Neither can practice a sport because I suffer a collagen disease, and I get tired easily.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- By medical indication, I need sleep around nine hours every day, but it is impossible.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- My English teacher orders a lot of homework (I'm kidding).
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- In general, I have little free time but I hope one day all this is worth it when, in the future, I help others.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7