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  • I’m a first year student at the Université Claude Bernard Lyon 1 studying a Higher National Diploma in Corporate and Administrative Management.
  • I would like to apply for a semester in the Dawson College.
  • With this letter I will convince you that I’m the perfect student to go to Dawson College in Montréal.
  • I always have been interested in Management, logistic, languages and marketing.
  • I always wanted to add an international dimension size to my university course to reach my goal which is to work in humanitarian in a global scale.
  • I choose GEA in order to acquire some knowledge on all the aspect of management.
  • I think that going at Dawson College will be a great addition to my studies.
  • This experience is seen as a personal and profesionnal enrichment.
  • It’s a way to develop even more my skills, my autonomy and it’s a value-adding to my future carrier.
  • Moreover Dawson college is going to be a very important step because I would like to oriente myself to a north american university after my diploma.
  • Besides, my character and my nature require new discoveries.
  • This need is driving by my taste and my interest pronounced for other culture works and cultural differences.
  • Moreover the challenges of living and accepting different working practices, surviving without my usual support network of family and friends will increases my resourcefulness and resilience.
  • It will also makes me more marketable to employers.
  • Montreal has been named the world’s best city for the students in the QS Best Student Cities 2017.
  • The encounter and research I performed really made me enthusiastic to discover Quebec.
  • Montreal is a mix of 21st century business infrastructure with and European Old charm.
  • Which makes it an ideal destination for me since I have a positive attitude and an open-mind which again allows me to interact with people from different cultures.
  • Also, Dawson College education is provided in english.
  • It will be very usefull for me to practice my english knowledge because I dream to be trilinguial in french english and spanish.Dawson College could make my dream come true.
  • Moreover I already went to USA where I’ve worked for an american family as a babysitter for a summer.
  • I use to make back and forth beetwen Lyon-Bruxelles-London to see my friends that I meet on the social Network Instagram.
  • When it comes to meet other people from other country I’m very sociable and enthusiastic.
  • I’m really familiar with the English world.
  • At the moment I’m interning with SABIC, a Saudi Arabian corporation global leader specialised in petrochemical in Morocco.
  • The internship is conduct in english.
  • I also think that I will be able to represent the IUT Lyon 1 fairly well in another country.
  • I’m very confident with our college and I enjoy the program.
  • Therefore I think that I will be a good ambassador for the IUT Lyon 1.
  • In addition I am very positive about our university, I am satisfied with my program so far and I really like our campus.
  • It became clear to me that the University is really trying to give us an opportunity with this parternship beetwen Dawson College and IUT Lyon 1.
  • I really want to put an international dimension in my future carrier.
  • As long as I have always been surroudend by diversity ; My education is europeen, I grew up in a Mediterranean family, and I want to pursue further studies in north America.
  • Because of all these reasons, I think that a semester in Dawson will be interesting and value-adding to undertake into the humanitarian world.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • I’m a first year student at the Université Claude Bernard Lyon 1 studying a Higher National Diploma in Corporate and Administrative Management.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
    • With this letter I will convince you that I’m the perfect student to go to Dawson College in Montréal.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I always wanted to add an international dimension size to my university course to reach my goal which is to work in humanitarian in a global scale.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
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  • câu 9
    • It’s a way to develop even more my skills, my autonomy and it’s a value-adding to my future carrier.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • Moreover Dawson college is going to be a very important step because I would like to oriente myself to a north american university after my diploma.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
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    • This need is driving by my taste and my interest pronounced for other culture works and cultural differences.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • Moreover the challenges of living and accepting different working practices, surviving without my usual support network of family and friends will increases my resourcefulness and resilience.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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    • Which makes it an ideal destination for me since I have a positive attitude and an open-mind which again allows me to interact with people from different cultures.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
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    • It will be very usefull for me to practice my english knowledge because I dream to be trilinguial in french english and spanish.Dawson College could make my dream come true.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
  • câu 21
  • câu 22
    • I use to make back and forth beetwen Lyon-Bruxelles-London to see my friends that I meet on the social Network Instagram.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22
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  • câu 25
    • At the moment I’m interning with SABIC, a Saudi Arabian corporation global leader specialised in petrochemical in Morocco.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25
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    • In addition I am very positive about our university, I am satisfied with my program so far and I really like our campus.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 30ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 30
  • câu 31
    • It became clear to me that the University is really trying to give us an opportunity with this parternship beetwen Dawson College and IUT Lyon 1.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 31ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 31
  • câu 32
  • câu 33
    • As long as I have always been surroudend by diversity ; My education is europeen, I grew up in a Mediterranean family, and I want to pursue further studies in north America.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 33ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 33
  • câu 34
    • Because of all these reasons, I think that a semester in Dawson will be interesting and value-adding to undertake into the humanitarian world.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 34ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 34