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Vasco record for an historical concert
Last night more than 200 000 people: men, wemen, youngers, olders.
All present in "Modena Park" for be protagonist of an historical consert.
The Italian Rock Star celebrated his 40 years like first Italian talent.
Vasco has been first singer to write and sing Rock music in Italian (not more in English).

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- Last night more than 200 000 people: men, wemen, youngers, olders.
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Sentence 2
- All present in "Modena Park" for be protagonist of an historical consert.
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Sentence 3
- The Italian Rock Star celebrated his 40 years like first Italian talent.
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Sentence 4
- Vasco has been first singer to write and sing Rock music in Italian (not more in English).
  Vote now!
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