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Today i'm happy because i have my new motorcycle.
My brother had an accident with my old motorcycle and she's finish in car breaks.

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句子 1
- Today i'm happy because i have my new motorcycle.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My brother had an accident with my old motorcycle and she's finish in car breaks.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2