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HELLO FROM VIETNAM
Send my hello to everyone in the world.
Today is a beautiful day in Ho Chi Minh city because it's had a big rain yesterday so the weather is cool this morning, not too hot than normal.
However, I get a cold.
So this morning I tried to get up early to do some exercises, then have breakfast with bread (Banh mi) - a famous street food in Vietnam on the way to the office.
This time many companies in Vietnam are arranging travelling for their staffs.
My company is going to book a tour to visit Nam Du island, a beautiful side and wild place to enjoy fresh air, fresh sea food.
Actually, I like to visit some places outside of Vietnam like Thailand, Singapore... because I never ever go abroad for annual travelling before...

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- HELLO FROM VIETNAM
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문장 1
- Send my hello to everyone in the world.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Today is a beautiful day in Ho Chi Minh city because it's had a big rain yesterday so the weather is cool this morning, not too hot than normal.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- However, I get a cold.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- So this morning I tried to get up early to do some exercises, then have breakfast with bread (Banh mi) - a famous street food in Vietnam on the way to the office.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- This time many companies in Vietnam are arranging travelling for their staffs.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- My company is going to book a tour to visit Nam Du island, a beautiful side and wild place to enjoy fresh air, fresh sea food.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- Actually, I like to visit some places outside of Vietnam like Thailand, Singapore... because I never ever go abroad for annual travelling before...
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7