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  • Most people say that organic products are expensive without really giving any thoughts to their blind belief.
  • When you think about the fact that white rice has a scarce amount of nutrition but more calories compared to the brown rice being rich in nutrition, or the danger hiding behind the artificial additives in most foods and beverages, people might reconsider and want to start reeducating themselves becoming aware of the huge amount of knowledge they lack.
  • If you pay for something, then you are a consumer, be it a school or a product.
  • There are lots of careless and indifferent consumers supporting bad products and allowing these companies to gain profit from their ignorance.
  • Therefore each consumer is responsible for allowing unhealthy or dangerous products to continue to be manufactured or companies to prosper.
  • If each and every consumer took pride in their rights as a consumer, and became responsible for what they pay for, a lot more people would be living a healthier life and Mother Earth would not be suffering such a great amount of damage today.

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    • When you think about the fact that white rice has a scarce amount of nutrition but more calories compared to the brown rice being rich in nutrition, or the danger hiding behind the artificial additives in most foods and beverages, people might reconsider and want to start reeducating themselves becoming aware of the huge amount of knowledge they lack.
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    • There are lots of careless and indifferent consumers supporting bad products and allowing these companies to gain profit from their ignorance.
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    • Therefore each consumer is responsible for allowing unhealthy or dangerous products to continue to be manufactured or companies to prosper.
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    • If each and every consumer took pride in their rights as a consumer, and became responsible for what they pay for, a lot more people would be living a healthier life and Mother Earth would not be suffering such a great amount of damage today.
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