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  • little dream of beginner in English :)

  • When I looked video in the internet, where woman tells about times in the Mars, I thought about it just like about English lesson.
  • But later I started think about times.
  • In the Earth day has 24 hours, in the Mars day longer about 40 minutes.
  • Actually, I dream about planet where day has about 30 hours. I can say why.
  • Firstly, it’s really cool when your day longer than usually.
  • You can sleep enough, and spend your time with people who makes you happy.
  • Secondly, your life will be longer and probably you will not think “It was like yesterday, but it was five-year ago!!”.
  • Also, your job will not problem for you, cause it will spend less time in day.
  • But of course has been disadvantages.
  • For example, it’s illusion of infinite day.

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