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  • Essay about the enviroment protection (First Certificate in Eng

  • In my book, the envirement protection is one of the most significant problem for the humanity.
  • At the current moment there are many coutries in the world that do not do anything to decrease polution of the enviroment.
  • Government of these countries must develop usefull laws that can help to protect our nature.
  • Now almost every family has a car and can you imagine, how many cars are on our planet now?
  • And each car influances on air in a negative way.
  • All of us are living in an industrial world, hence we are surrouded by so many factories.
  • Not every chief of factory takes care about safety of some chemicals that his factory can produce and pure in nearest pond.
  • As a result: rivers, lakes, seas and oceans suffer too, not only air.
  • Of course, we should not forget about soil.
  • Fruits, vegetables and other eatable grow on a poison soil and eating them can cause problems with health.
  • As you can see, at the current time we have many different problems connecting with the enviroment protection but I would like to be optimistic now.
  • On my subjective opinion, if we can become more serious to this theme, spend more time thinking about it and be more polite to our planet, we will solve the vast scope of problems that we are having now.
  • Obviously, it demands some efforts but eventually we will have clear planet and even can save a few lifes.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • At the current moment there are many coutries in the world that do not do anything to decrease polution of the enviroment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Not every chief of factory takes care about safety of some chemicals that his factory can produce and pure in nearest pond.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
  • câu 9
  • câu 10
    • Fruits, vegetables and other eatable grow on a poison soil and eating them can cause problems with health.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • As you can see, at the current time we have many different problems connecting with the enviroment protection but I would like to be optimistic now.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • On my subjective opinion, if we can become more serious to this theme, spend more time thinking about it and be more polite to our planet, we will solve the vast scope of problems that we are having now.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • Obviously, it demands some efforts but eventually we will have clear planet and even can save a few lifes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13