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  • Dream List

  • The first time I made my own dream list was not so long ago.
  • That was a task in one online challenge about writing down 20 things you'd like to realize most - things you dream about.
  • I just couldn't go to sleep that night because of desire to finish the task.
  • I tried to think big, but at the same time, I was focused on a short term (like 3-5 years).
  • My list contained a lot of different things like speaking advanced Spanish, running half-marathon, volunteering in South America, California road trip and even these swings on the picture at the End of the World.
  • That was a real inspiration that you feel when you start to visualize all your wishes and that gave me new energy for realizing it.
  • The dream list is often called as a "bucket list" - list of things you want to experience or accomplish before you die.
  • It has different variations like "things to do before turning 30".
  • We all dream about something but collecting these wishes in a concrete list is a first step in making them a reality.
  • I believe that writing down a goal helps you to achieve it and moreover, it's an opportunity to understand what you really want.
  • You can easily make up first items but then you start brainstorming, and it is always an exciting process.
  • Here I encourage you to create your personal dream list.
  • It is up to you make it online or write down on a piece of paper, to create 100 items or just 20, to share it with friends or keep it private.
  • Do whatever you want with your list but just get some inspiration and listen to what you truly want.
  • Try not to focus only on travelling or career for example, think wider.
  • Your goals should be challenging and hard to accomplish right tomorrow but I advise you to remove completely unrealistic goals as this dreaming doesn't has value.
  • For sure, very important to review your list sometimes to check that your items are still relevant and that your list inspires you.
  • Finally the dream list reminds you that life is short and you have so much things to discover, so making list is just the beginning.

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    • That was a task in one online challenge about writing down 20 things you'd like to realize most - things you dream about.
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    • My list contained a lot of different things like speaking advanced Spanish, running half-marathon, volunteering in South America, California road trip and even these swings on the picture at the End of the World.
      투표하세요!
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    • That was a real inspiration that you feel when you start to visualize all your wishes and that gave me new energy for realizing it.
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    • The dream list is often called as a "bucket list" - list of things you want to experience or accomplish before you die.
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    • We all dream about something but collecting these wishes in a concrete list is a first step in making them a reality.
      투표하세요!
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    • I believe that writing down a goal helps you to achieve it and moreover, it's an opportunity to understand what you really want.
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    • It is up to you make it online or write down on a piece of paper, to create 100 items or just 20, to share it with friends or keep it private.
      투표하세요!
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    • Your goals should be challenging and hard to accomplish right tomorrow but I advise you to remove completely unrealistic goals as this dreaming doesn't has value.
      투표하세요!
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    • For sure, very important to review your list sometimes to check that your items are still relevant and that your list inspires you.
      투표하세요!
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    • Finally the dream list reminds you that life is short and you have so much things to discover, so making list is just the beginning.
      투표하세요!
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