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Văn bản từ Little_rosie - English

  • MY SAD DAY!!!

  • Through this website, I know many people, someone is good who always friendly and polite, other one is not.
  • In fact, I get friend with many people and keep in touch with them until now.
  • But today is really a sad day for me.
  • One man is trying to contact me, his purpose is not get friend, he wants to cheat me and I'm so sad to know about that.
  • If I didn't search his picture on Google and found many story about him, I will never know how risky I get by online because this is the first time I meet this situation.
  • I sent email to him to let him know that I known his plan at all, hope he didn't cheat to get money from others but I know it's useless.
  • My main reason I join this page is I want to get true friend and improve my English so I hope anyone who wants to cheat or play with me please do not contact me.
  • P/s: Everyone should be carefull, I do not say people is bad, just a little but we still should be carefull.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Through this website, I know many people, someone is good who always friendly and polite, other one is not.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • One man is trying to contact me, his purpose is not get friend, he wants to cheat me and I'm so sad to know about that.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • If I didn't search his picture on Google and found many story about him, I will never know how risky I get by online because this is the first time I meet this situation.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I sent email to him to let him know that I known his plan at all, hope he didn't cheat to get money from others but I know it's useless.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • My main reason I join this page is I want to get true friend and improve my English so I hope anyone who wants to cheat or play with me please do not contact me.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • P/s: Everyone should be carefull, I do not say people is bad, just a little but we still should be carefull.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8