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Text from Symmons - English

This Time (part 2)
Soon we won't feel that enjoyment when the sun shine and heat our skin like cooking hob too busy on our smartphones.
We're already clearly lost our grip on reality to give way of a none sens life style and principles that "they" screwed inside our minds in a snap of fingers time.

หัวข้อ
- This Time (part 2)
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- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - หัวข้อ
Sentence 1
- Soon we won't feel that enjoyment when the sun shine and heat our skin like cooking hob too busy on our smartphones.
  Vote now!
- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- We're already clearly lost our grip on reality to give way of a none sens life style and principles that "they" screwed inside our minds in a snap of fingers time.
  Vote now!
- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 2