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Symmons (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

  • This Time (part 4)

  • Losing that something we loved so much is a pain that brings light it was what it made us deeply happy.
  • Does it mean sorrow is actually necessary to realize we enjoyed an old time before?
  • This acceptance of that new "modern" life we inoculate in us aren't a natural human decision, sick-brains cannot be good decision-makers.
  • If we were in good condition and healthy holistic-thought never would we agree an insane scheme that gonna bring our enslavement and distroy all the human beauty.
  • Thinking we are free by being modern consumerist-slave and seeking an infinite unsatisfiable materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
  • In a society where we control out thoughts and where we make a fool every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it more liveable.

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  • 문장 1
  • 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • This acceptance of that new "modern" life we inoculate in us aren't a natural human decision, sick-brains cannot be good decision-makers.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • If we were in good condition and healthy holistic-thought never would we agree an insane scheme that gonna bring our enslavement and distroy all the human beauty.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • Thinking we are free by being modern consumerist-slave and seeking an infinite unsatisfiable materialism purpose is what we want from us and it does work.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • In a society where we control out thoughts and where we make a fool every nonconformist ideas that could high-rise human life and make it more liveable.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6