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  • Introduction : Learn a language to understand the world

  • According to research, language defines ourselves and our conception of the world.
  • In fact, learning a language could change the way we understand the world.
  • Today more than yesterday, with internet and the globalisation, whereas lot of countries are closing their minds to strangers, is it not necessary to look at the world with a new eye?
  • To open your communication organs to this stranger world, this small article purpose to give you the keys that could help and motivate you to learn a new language.
  • The first part will speak about the main variables shaping the learn of a new language either the genetic, the environment and the motivation.
  • The second part focus on the motivation and the part of the brain that should be implied to learn a new language.
  • Finally, the last part underlines the learning of a language as a mean to unite people and provide peace on earth.
  • This text is organised to facilize your research of information but I have not the pretention to write a scientific article even if it reviews several articles.

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    • Today more than yesterday, with internet and the globalisation, whereas lot of countries are closing their minds to strangers, is it not necessary to look at the world with a new eye?
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • To open your communication organs to this stranger world, this small article purpose to give you the keys that could help and motivate you to learn a new language.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • The first part will speak about the main variables shaping the learn of a new language either the genetic, the environment and the motivation.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • The second part focus on the motivation and the part of the brain that should be implied to learn a new language.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
  • 문장 7
    • Finally, the last part underlines the learning of a language as a mean to unite people and provide peace on earth.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
  • 문장 8
    • This text is organised to facilize your research of information but I have not the pretention to write a scientific article even if it reviews several articles.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8