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Travelling
Nowadays travelling is a popular art, how someone can spend your free time or a vacation.
People can go almost in every place on the Earth.
It is a good opporrtunity to learn another culture and to see a very interesting nature or culture sights.
People travel by train, by plane, by boat and by car.
During a trip you become the impressions, that give you an energy for a hard everyday work.
I dont travel so often.
I was a few times in Krim.
There are a beautiful nature on the peninsula.
I was once time in Germany.
Most of the time I was in Berlin, but I liked better Bavaria.

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- Nowadays travelling is a popular art, how someone can spend your free time or a vacation.
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- People can go almost in every place on the Earth.
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- It is a good opporrtunity to learn another culture and to see a very interesting nature or culture sights.
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- People travel by train, by plane, by boat and by car.
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- During a trip you become the impressions, that give you an energy for a hard everyday work.
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- I dont travel so often.
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- I was a few times in Krim.
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- There are a beautiful nature on the peninsula.
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- I was once time in Germany.
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- Most of the time I was in Berlin, but I liked better Bavaria.
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