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My dream
I've always wanted to leave France one day to move to Canada.
I think, If I really want to do it, I can do it !
And I have a plan.
Firstly, I have to pass baccalaureate and then go to faculty of medecine because I want to be oncologist.
End after my studies I'll go to Toronto where a part of my family lives.
They said to me one day, that they can take me for a while at their home.
They are so kind !
And thanks to them, I've got a chance to live in Canada !

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- I've always wanted to leave France one day to move to Canada.
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- I think, If I really want to do it, I can do it !
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- And I have a plan.
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- Firstly, I have to pass baccalaureate and then go to faculty of medecine because I want to be oncologist.
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- End after my studies I'll go to Toronto where a part of my family lives.
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- They said to me one day, that they can take me for a while at their home.
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- They are so kind !
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- And thanks to them, I've got a chance to live in Canada !
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