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Holydays
In Russia we have a lot of holydays.
For example, New Year, Victory Day International Women's Day, Worker’s Day, National Day etc. I think the most people like New Year.
One celebrates this holiday with pleasure, dress the New Year Tree, make presents.
But I dislike this holyday because of noise and commotion.
I’m a religious person and church fetes are more important to me.
I like Easter and Christmas.

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- In Russia we have a lot of holydays.
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- For example, New Year, Victory Day International Women's Day, Worker’s Day, National Day etc. I think the most people like New Year.
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- One celebrates this holiday with pleasure, dress the New Year Tree, make presents.
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- But I dislike this holyday because of noise and commotion.
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- I’m a religious person and church fetes are more important to me.
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- I like Easter and Christmas.
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