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  • I am xxx ,I'm 33years old,I have a baccalaureate of art and one years of study in faculty of economics ,I left my studies to work as a manager in various stores.as you can see from my enclosed cv ,I have extensive and relevant sales experience in client interaction up selling,assisting customers with product selection and excellent communicating and negotiating skills.

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    • I am xxx ,I'm 33years old,I have a baccalaureate of art and one years of study in faculty of economics ,I left my studies to work as a manager in various stores.as you can see from my enclosed cv ,I have extensive and relevant sales experience in client interaction up selling,assisting customers with product selection and excellent communicating and negotiating skills.
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