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  • My day cycling in Lima

  • Hi, I´m studying in university of Piura located in Lima, but at saturdays i plan to cycling long disatances from Chorrillos till Lima a round trip, nearby Rimac river, cause i wanna be included in Cyclism Federation, i have knowledge that sportsmens inside the federation are by far more resistant to cycle so long distances, but I am recently starting up cycling such long distances,besides, I do it for picking up more strenght.
  • I think was the last saturday when cycling by av arequipa y encountered with a nudist strike, i couldn´t believe what i was seeing ,but i fllowed them up and i realised they were going till the same congress. i don´t know why they did that, but all cars passing throug the strike got stuck by long time.
  • Ok, I dont remember more things ,cause i falled in head when cycling i don´t remember when happended it, but i can just remember the nudist strike.

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    • Hi, I´m studying in university of Piura located in Lima, but at saturdays i plan to cycling long disatances from Chorrillos till Lima a round trip, nearby Rimac river, cause i wanna be included in Cyclism Federation, i have knowledge that sportsmens inside the federation are by far more resistant to cycle so long distances, but I am recently starting up cycling such long distances,besides, I do it for picking up more strenght.
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    • I think was the last saturday when cycling by av arequipa y encountered with a nudist strike, i couldn´t believe what i was seeing ,but i fllowed them up and i realised they were going till the same congress. i don´t know why they did that, but all cars passing throug the strike got stuck by long time.
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    • Ok, I dont remember more things ,cause i falled in head when cycling i don´t remember when happended it, but i can just remember the nudist strike.
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