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My holydays in UK
My plans for this summer are to do trips in the United Kingdom.
It's my first time in Great Britain, and I going to visit England: the heart of the Uk.
In England there is the recidence of the Queen and the paliament.
Next I going to Wales with his dragon on the flag, and Scotland with his misteryus lake.
At the end of the round, I want visiting too Ireland (the Green land).

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- My plans for this summer are to do trips in the United Kingdom.
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- It's my first time in Great Britain, and I going to visit England: the heart of the Uk.
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- In England there is the recidence of the Queen and the paliament.
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- Next I going to Wales with his dragon on the flag, and Scotland with his misteryus lake.
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- At the end of the round, I want visiting too Ireland (the Green land).
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