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Hi everyone !
Hi !
Today I was shopping with my best friends.
It's so very fun !
I have buy a shirt a flower, a jeggind and a necklase elephant.
And we have eat a ice to carame !
She was delicious!
Now I go learn my lesson because monday I will a test.

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- Hi !
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- Today I was shopping with my best friends.
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- It's so very fun !
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- I have buy a shirt a flower, a jeggind and a necklase elephant.
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- And we have eat a ice to carame !
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- She was delicious!
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- Now I go learn my lesson because monday I will a test.
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