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Text from zulema20 - English

  • Why I prefer go to small clubs.

  • Do you like live performance?
  • I remember the crowd place, a havy rain, mud on the floor and few light.
  • Does it sound familiar to you?
  • I enjoy a lot listening music, concerts, new albums and live performance of any singer but I really hate concerts on stadiums.
  • The problem of this kind of place is the audience.
  • Although many guys of my same age say that is the best thing and an opportunity to make friends too, but I totally disagree.
  • I really hate people's sing.
  • The last time I went to a concer of famous band called Elefantes from Mexico, there were a group od teenagers who sung too loud while drunk beer.
  • They did not know the lyrics and danced with romantic songs.
  • The sucurity police told them to be quite.
  • Despite this, they continued dancing, singing and drinking as they were the only ones in the concert.
  • If I go to concerts I prefer small clubs because there is easy to have a conversation with friends and have funny too.
  • Another reason for prefering small clubs is convenience.
  • I like the athosmphere, there is no smoke, the views are nice and is safe.
  • In spite of of my love for live performance sometime they get boring for example If I am in a small club and the singer sings bad I just leave it quickly.
  • While I watch live performance thyough social media like Facebook I also watch outdoor performances.
  • In fact this are the most that I enjoy a lot.
  • So these days, when a friend invite me to a big concert, I just say, ¨No thanks¨.
  • I really prefer outdoor performance or go to small clubs.
  • I can decide where I want to go and with who, the tickets are quite expensives but it does not matter, the purpose is feel myself comfortable.

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