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why did you choose your major?
i choose audio production as my major because i have a genuine interest in sound and music.
i think music is a great way that people can understand how feel they are.
also i have had really passionate about touching people.
this is why i choose audio production as my major.

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- i choose audio production as my major because i have a genuine interest in sound and music.
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- i think music is a great way that people can understand how feel they are.
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- also i have had really passionate about touching people.
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- this is why i choose audio production as my major.
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