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Poruka od Adrian_200 - English

  • Do you think TV is educational?

  • Watching TV is common way spending time.
  • There are many people watching TV every day.
  • On the other side more and more people jack in this form of spending leisure.
  • Is watching TV beneficial or inside out?
  • There is no doubts that there are advantages corelated with watching TV.
  • You can keep with the news, develop your inverests or follow to sports events.
  • If you have thematic channels you can choose something dedicated for you.
  • Television is often critisized but there is meaningful invention last century.
  • It reached even the most backward places on the Earth and changed way of thinking whole mankind.
  • However has a bunch of drawbacks.
  • Firstly is addictive as hell.
  • People are slaves of habits and it's also this case.
  • TV is often first thing what appears in brain after wakening or coming from work.
  • Everything act unconciously and without time control.
  • You watch tremendous amount things which don't interrest you.
  • Watching is so addictive that you often are suprised what you just watched.
  • Therfore adverts are very effective.
  • Next thing which I want to emphesise is relatively new.
  • Content is more and more worse.
  • The programs are silly, quizes not demanding, current affairs contein a lot of propaganda.
  • Television dumbs down.
  • Finally watching TV is especially dangerous for children and parents use TV as a way to rest from their offsprings.
  • To sum up, there are differents points of view whether it's good or bad.
  • There is answer very familiar to others spheres of life.
  • Everithing what is uses too much is harmful.
  • Every should strike a balance.

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