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Music and young people fall in love
Nowadays many more people listen to music than in the past.
Thanks our different music systems we can choice our favourite music.
Many young people can't live without music.
They choice the music about their sentiments.
When they are fall in love they prefer all songs who talk of love, stay together, passion.
Life is pink and music re-call good moments lived together our partner.

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- Nowadays many more people listen to music than in the past.
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- Thanks our different music systems we can choice our favourite music.
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- Many young people can't live without music.
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- They choice the music about their sentiments.
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- When they are fall in love they prefer all songs who talk of love, stay together, passion.
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- Life is pink and music re-call good moments lived together our partner.
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