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  • Where does gold come from?
  • Long time ago, many people wanted to make gold.
  • Though they couldn’t, they believed they can do that in the future.
  • Did you know that gold is extraterrestrial?
  • Instead of arising from our planet’s rocky crust, it was actually cooked up in space and is present on Earth because of cataclysmic stellar explosions called supernova.
  • Scientist David Lunney outlines the incredible journey of gold from space to Earth.
  • And gold certain many chemical elements of the space.
  • And now, gold is one of our lifes.
  • We need gold to buy food, water, house and many things else.
  • Gold took one part of our lifes.
  • I have never seen gold. And you?
  • Have you ever seen gold?
  • What does it look like?
  • Please tell me.
  • Thank you so much.

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