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  • English means all for me

  • I'm very excited and dedicated in learn English , because I want to apply in a work where you need to know English and what I like most is that they pay very well , i would like to enter in that job also becuse the schedules are good for me, because I'm studying at the college and so I really , really I need that job, and I studying very very hard to get it .
  • the job is about chating with people form New Your and for that reason I need a great level of English , I ready introduce me at the interview but they said that I need a little bit of english , so I am here to study

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    • I'm very excited and dedicated in learn English , because I want to apply in a work where you need to know English and what I like most is that they pay very well , i would like to enter in that job also becuse the schedules are good for me, because I'm studying at the college and so I really , really I need that job, and I studying very very hard to get it .
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    • the job is about chating with people form New Your and for that reason I need a great level of English , I ready introduce me at the interview but they said that I need a little bit of english , so I am here to study
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