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  • a little bit of my life

  • I was born in 1996 in march. specifically on 15 march at 11 pm on a wednesday .
  • I like to go to cinema , play chess , play guitar , play video games , well my neiborhood is dangerous because there are delinquency , thefts , deads .
  • its a poor neiborhood but here also there are good people , a lot of them are kinds , are nice . but I am very afraid the live here because i don't now maybe a lost bullet can kill me and ..
  • I still have a lot of goal to complete for that reason I wan to move to another neiborhood that has more peace. that's it .

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    • I like to go to cinema , play chess , play guitar , play video games , well my neiborhood is dangerous because there are delinquency , thefts , deads .
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    • its a poor neiborhood but here also there are good people , a lot of them are kinds , are nice . but I am very afraid the live here because i don't now maybe a lost bullet can kill me and ..
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    • I still have a lot of goal to complete for that reason I wan to move to another neiborhood that has more peace. that's it .
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