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Text from riichard_c - English

  • What did I do today?

  • I got up at 7 pm then I took a shower and I went to the college and I saw a girl , pretty pretty beautyful so I approached her and I said Hey Hi she got a little bit laugh but she answered me and said HI , so, after a few minutes she had to go to class , well I hope to see her again.

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    • I got up at 7 pm then I took a shower and I went to the college and I saw a girl , pretty pretty beautyful so I approached her and I said Hey Hi she got a little bit laugh but she answered me and said HI , so, after a few minutes she had to go to class , well I hope to see her again.
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