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  • well , today I got up at 7 pm and I started reading a book about a real story of a mad man. then I get ready to go to the college to class english , in this class we started counting numbers the one to one-hundred with a parther this mix with movements . the second exercise was invent a perfect job with its requiriment to apply and then we did a grup of twelve against other grup of twelve too , for debate a topic about a job where you have to go down to 5 km under graund and stay for a year without media but the best of this job is that you earn 30000 dollars a moth .
  • well then we did an interview with a pather finally we wrote about how to cope the stress in a job after that the class finiched and my brother picked me up to carry me to house in his motocicle , I recall that I was very hungry , then the couple minutes we reach to home to rest

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    • well , today I got up at 7 pm and I started reading a book about a real story of a mad man. then I get ready to go to the college to class english , in this class we started counting numbers the one to one-hundred with a parther this mix with movements . the second exercise was invent a perfect job with its requiriment to apply and then we did a grup of twelve against other grup of twelve too , for debate a topic about a job where you have to go down to 5 km under graund and stay for a year without media but the best of this job is that you earn 30000 dollars a moth .
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    • well then we did an interview with a pather finally we wrote about how to cope the stress in a job after that the class finiched and my brother picked me up to carry me to house in his motocicle , I recall that I was very hungry , then the couple minutes we reach to home to rest
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