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My personal desires and happiness does not matter and my childhood is over now anyways.

Moreover one of my wonderful solution that you probably were languished for since almost half of this text is to get rid of the obsolete mentality consisting by doing everything to protect our own and own loves one without taking anyone else in consideration.

I pray with all my soul that the empathy, compassion, understanding people's emotions, creativity and all the real valours undervalued by the system shall rise and gives us the key of the workable Utopian life that I have dreamed so much...