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Text from riichard_c - English

  • She and he

  • She is tweleve and lives with her bother in a norrow house, she supports her brother, working in a bank, she spends with her boyfirend all the night, while her bother spends all the time playing chess, she delivers a letter each month to her uncle , her uncle is at the jail with a sentence for 3 year by steal, she visit her uncle one time a year because the jail is very far from her home.

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    • She is tweleve and lives with her bother in a norrow house, she supports her brother, working in a bank, she spends with her boyfirend all the night, while her bother spends all the time playing chess, she delivers a letter each month to her uncle , her uncle is at the jail with a sentence for 3 year by steal, she visit her uncle one time a year because the jail is very far from her home.
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