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Texto de riichard_c - English

  • brother's racing cars

  • I am aware that my brother is good racing but in this time he againts the best I really I don´t if my brother is going to win but I am going to support him in this recing with heart, his enemy has a lot of strenghts but my brother too.
  • Days after the racing the race was great despite that fact he has lost, I am going to I´m going to say how was the racing. it was a race the one vs one 20 km of runway. my brother was in one number position when the enemy after a few minutes he is was reaching my brother and my brother could't reach him because he is vere good racer he is as fast as thunderbolt , they pass by traps but this did't stop them , rocks drupping of the montains , broken birdges and that it was enough to stop the race , it was awesome, but in the end everyone known who was going to win.

POR FAVOR, ¡AYUDA A CORREGIR CADA ORACIÓN! - English

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  • Oración 1
    • I am aware that my brother is good racing but in this time he againts the best I really I don´t if my brother is going to win but I am going to support him in this recing with heart, his enemy has a lot of strenghts but my brother too.
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 1¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 1
  • Oración 2
    • Days after the racing the race was great despite that fact he has lost, I am going to I´m going to say how was the racing. it was a race the one vs one 20 km of runway. my brother was in one number position when the enemy after a few minutes he is was reaching my brother and my brother could't reach him because he is vere good racer he is as fast as thunderbolt , they pass by traps but this did't stop them , rocks drupping of the montains , broken birdges and that it was enough to stop the race , it was awesome, but in the end everyone known who was going to win.
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2