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  • abute iran; Kerman

  • Kerman is big of state in Iran ( for extent) today I want to speak about my city in Kerman, I was born in Jiroft.
  • Jiroft have a 250.000 people and hot weather and very suny, the weather all of time in year is hot but around a Jirofa ( abute 20K) have a cool weather ( its amazing) that's why we call small India, because you can see cool and hot fruit togther semilar dat and walnut.
  • Jiroft have a oldest civilization in world 5000 year befor the birth of Christ( you can more read in wikipedia)

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    • Kerman is big of state in Iran ( for extent) today I want to speak about my city in Kerman, I was born in Jiroft.
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    • Jiroft have a 250.000 people and hot weather and very suny, the weather all of time in year is hot but around a Jirofa ( abute 20K) have a cool weather ( its amazing) that's why we call small India, because you can see cool and hot fruit togther semilar dat and walnut.
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