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  • Hello I'm Richard and I would like to shere something of my life , well , I'm from Colombia and I live in a narrow house but I like it in my house I have a tv for watching some films also I have got a lot of pencil for drawing pictures , I'm good to draw when I finiching draw I check it for seeing if it is right. drawing helps me for destress . sometimes I have delayed with a draw still for 3 hours. but as a reasult a good draw from me .
  • I like sleep on in my sofa is very confortable but sometime my mother didn't let me to sleep there , and sometime I decide not do it .
  • I don't like to sleep on my bed because I stay awake.
  • I have my breakfast at 7 am after that I go to jogging.

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    • Hello I'm Richard and I would like to shere something of my life , well , I'm from Colombia and I live in a narrow house but I like it in my house I have a tv for watching some films also I have got a lot of pencil for drawing pictures , I'm good to draw when I finiching draw I check it for seeing if it is right. drawing helps me for destress . sometimes I have delayed with a draw still for 3 hours. but as a reasult a good draw from me .
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    • I like sleep on in my sofa is very confortable but sometime my mother didn't let me to sleep there , and sometime I decide not do it .
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