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  • Review of a fictional music festival.

  • (I cannot seem able to make the website separate the various subtitles and paragraphs, anyone knows how?
  • I have wrapped in squared parenthesis the subtitles as a temporary solution.) THE FOUR LIONS FESTIVAL.
  • [Introduction].
  • I have now attended the Four Lions Festival for four years in a row, and as I have become more familiar with its structure and organisation, I have decided to review it on ClickAdvisor for others to see and attend what I believe to be one of the best music festival of the region.
  • [The Where and the When].
  • The Four Lions is located in the main park of R’lyeh and falls in autumn, at the end of October, lasting four days. [The Themes].
  • It offers a variety of musical themes, from Punk Rock to Electronic, from Commercial Pop to more hip free styles.
  • Some times even blues comes into play!
  • [And the Foods].
  • But music is just food for our hears, and the Festival surely knows how to satiate hungry mouths too, as a number of stands opens up with all the recipes of local cuisine.
  • They prepare pizzas and cook a variety of dishes with weird sounding names tract from the dialect of the region, like "Sbrislona", which is a cake that easily crumbles away, and "Pisarei e Fasò", an old recipe for pasta with beans. [The Fauna].
  • The attendees of the festival vary on the hour of the day.
  • During the late afternoon, the elderly come along and listen to accordion playing old ballads, while at twilight families commonly pop up to dine with some soft music in the background.
  • As the day leaves space to the night, groups ranging from teens to 30 year olds become more common and the volumes increase, to be turned down only at dawn basically. [Conclusion].
  • The festival can be enjoyed by everyone, of any age, depending on the time of the day and it’s pretty common to make new friends there.
  • I’ll be there this year, hope to see you too!

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • (I cannot seem able to make the website separate the various subtitles and paragraphs, anyone knows how?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
    • I have wrapped in squared parenthesis the subtitles as a temporary solution.) THE FOUR LIONS FESTIVAL.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 4
    • I have now attended the Four Lions Festival for four years in a row, and as I have become more familiar with its structure and organisation, I have decided to review it on ClickAdvisor for others to see and attend what I believe to be one of the best music festival of the region.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • The Four Lions is located in the main park of R’lyeh and falls in autumn, at the end of October, lasting four days. [The Themes].
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 7
    • It offers a variety of musical themes, from Punk Rock to Electronic, from Commercial Pop to more hip free styles.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 10
    • But music is just food for our hears, and the Festival surely knows how to satiate hungry mouths too, as a number of stands opens up with all the recipes of local cuisine.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 11
    • They prepare pizzas and cook a variety of dishes with weird sounding names tract from the dialect of the region, like "Sbrislona", which is a cake that easily crumbles away, and "Pisarei e Fasò", an old recipe for pasta with beans. [The Fauna].
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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  • câu 13
    • During the late afternoon, the elderly come along and listen to accordion playing old ballads, while at twilight families commonly pop up to dine with some soft music in the background.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • As the day leaves space to the night, groups ranging from teens to 30 year olds become more common and the volumes increase, to be turned down only at dawn basically. [Conclusion].
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 15
    • The festival can be enjoyed by everyone, of any age, depending on the time of the day and it’s pretty common to make new friends there.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 16