添削

Once upon time an old man was digging and found a strange freeze woman when suddenly by of the hot sun the ice started to melt slowly, the old man hid behind a tree , when whole the ice melted she was naked and shook herself and her body was shining and the old man was scared and fled, the woman used her hair as a weapon and frozen him then she unfroze him to said him that got calm then she started to explain him who is she and also where does she come from, when he understood everything, he left the place without saying nothing.