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Who is the most influential person to you?
I respect 전현무 who TV presenter, because of his passion for learning.
Before I listened to his speech, I just thought of him as a famous figure but not relevant to me.
When I listened to his speech, I was so inspired by his passion for learning.
He really made it as a TV presenter, but he has developing self-improvement, learning English and Chinese.
He taught me a big lesson that I have to have passion for learning, don't crack my jaw.

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- I respect 전현무 who TV presenter, because of his passion for learning.
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- Before I listened to his speech, I just thought of him as a famous figure but not relevant to me.
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- When I listened to his speech, I was so inspired by his passion for learning.
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- He really made it as a TV presenter, but he has developing self-improvement, learning English and Chinese.
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- He taught me a big lesson that I have to have passion for learning, don't crack my jaw.
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