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  • I was and my house when a friend of mine called me , he talked me was sick . he had gripe with blood sneezes and I said him : if I was you , I would go to the doctor , well he said yes so I piked up him in his house after that we go to the doctor the doctor explained it everything to us and the doctor gave to my friend some pills .

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    • I was and my house when a friend of mine called me , he talked me was sick . he had gripe with blood sneezes and I said him : if I was you , I would go to the doctor , well he said yes so I piked up him in his house after that we go to the doctor the doctor explained it everything to us and the doctor gave to my friend some pills .
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