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  • You’re swimming in the ocean when something brushes your leg.
  • When the tingling sets in, you realize you’ve been sting by a jellyfish.
  • How do these beautiful gelatinous creatures pack such a painful punch?
  • A person details the science behind the sting.
  • The jellyfish are very beautiful.
  • They are alive with their tails.
  • Their tails contain many dangerous things.
  • If we took their tails, we’ll die.
  • So we must to don’t touch them.
  • But many animals can eat jellyfish, like turtles or sunfish.
  • And If the jellyfish stings us, we must pour the vinegar and take our body to the beach.
  • We mustn’t use mineral water.
  • In all kinds of jellyfish, I like a kind of jelly fish named "Lion’s mane".
  • It’s very long and beautiful.
  • It’s longer than the whale.
  • May be it’s long for 100 feets.
  • Anyway, I love the jellyfish and I want to see them one day.

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