從riichard_c來的文本 - English

  • The race

  • I was at my college when suddenly I recieved a call phone and I was ask to go to the race , so immediately I pick my bag and left the college when I arrived to the race track everything it was ready so I got on my car I was ready to the race and the traffilight was in red when it passed to green the race started ...
  • I was doing the best of me and slowly I started to climb positions still to reach the first position . so when the last lap was missing someone reached me then surpassed me. he was the winner , I wonder how he did it? if I had a big advantage.

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    • I was at my college when suddenly I recieved a call phone and I was ask to go to the race , so immediately I pick my bag and left the college when I arrived to the race track everything it was ready so I got on my car I was ready to the race and the traffilight was in red when it passed to green the race started ...
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    • I was doing the best of me and slowly I started to climb positions still to reach the first position . so when the last lap was missing someone reached me then surpassed me. he was the winner , I wonder how he did it? if I had a big advantage.
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