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  • I would like to create an anime that is my goal since I was 15 because I like a lot drawing and invent things like write news stories, books etc . the anime that I will create is about the intelligent the world where the intelligent is the more important for surviving the world where you only weapon is your intelligent because depending of your type of intelligence that you develop will be your weapon for defence yourself and attack.there will be fights better than Drangonball Z, One Piece etc...
  • I swear it this will be the best anime that ever, there will be a lot of characters and personalities and the drawings will be very reals.

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  • câu 1
    • I would like to create an anime that is my goal since I was 15 because I like a lot drawing and invent things like write news stories, books etc . the anime that I will create is about the intelligent the world where the intelligent is the more important for surviving the world where you only weapon is your intelligent because depending of your type of intelligence that you develop will be your weapon for defence yourself and attack.there will be fights better than Drangonball Z, One Piece etc...
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
    • I swear it this will be the best anime that ever, there will be a lot of characters and personalities and the drawings will be very reals.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2