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Family
Hi.
I wanted write to about my family.
My family is great because my mum always cares for me and my father always is niced.

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- Family
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句子 1
- Hi.
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句子 2
- I wanted write to about my family.
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句子 3
- My family is great because my mum always cares for me and my father always is niced.
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